This essay focuses on professional academic formats.
I sent the article to a journal. they reject it with many comments. some of their comments are tough. I did my best and tried to do their comments but I am still not happy with my corrections.

professional academic formats

I sent the article to a journal. they reject it with many comments. some of their comments are tough. I did my best and tried to do their comments but I am still not happy with my corrections. Now, I need your help to re-write the article in full top down and issue new version in professional academic formats and make sure it met their comments.

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An academic or scholarly journal is a periodical publication in which scholarship relating to a particular academic discipline is publish. Academic journals serve as permanent and transparent forums for the presentation, scrutiny, and discussion of research. They are usually peer-reviewed or refereed.^[1] Content typically takes the form of articles presenting original research, review articles, and book reviews.

The purpose of an academic journal, according to Henry Oldenburg

(the first editor of Philosophical Transactions of the Royal Society), is to give researchers a venue to “impart their knowledge to one another, and contribute what they can to the Grand design of improving natural knowledge, and perfecting all Philosophical Arts, and Sciences.”^[2]

The term academic journal applies to scholarly publications in all fields; this article discusses the aspects common to all academic field journals. Scientific journals and journals of the quantitative social sciences vary in form and function from journals of the humanities and qualitative social sciences; their specific aspects are separately discuss.

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